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23 August 2007 @ 08:18 pm
HP fic: The Last Road Less Travelled  
HP fic: The Last Road Less Travelled
This part: 6215 words, PG-13, ships have dropped anchor in deep waters
Previous chapters: Go here.

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Current Mood: creativeproud & fin de siecle
Current Music: why (annie lennox)
 
 
 
orpheneritus: KabaAto-King of the Worldorpheneritus on September 4th, 2007 01:29 am (UTC)
Wow, I really enjoyed this characterisation of Albus so much. I think the thing that really keep me riveted was his relationship with James. Some people dismiss too much to sibling rivalry.
every Starbucks should have a polar bearscoradh on September 18th, 2007 07:57 pm (UTC)
I agree! Siblings and their ruckuses are always fun to write. :D
kat: Slash = <3scelerisin on September 9th, 2007 10:51 pm (UTC)
... [dies]

It was perfect, absolutely perfect. I think I'm gonna cry. D=
every Starbucks should have a polar bear: stealin ur virginityscoradh on September 18th, 2007 08:01 pm (UTC)
Oh, don't cry Shopgirl!
jedipmjedipm on September 11th, 2007 01:11 pm (UTC)
I left a comment on part two posted at the_ass_ship. I really loved this story and became enchanted with your characterizations. This is a very emotionally rich and moving story. Thank you for posting. I look forward to reading the rest of your fic now that I have found you. You are quite talented.
every Starbucks should have a polar bear: SGA: +scoradh on September 18th, 2007 08:02 pm (UTC)
I'm glad to hear all those things! It had to be something as it wasn't slash, I suppose. Thank you. ♥
jedipmjedipm on September 11th, 2007 01:17 pm (UTC)
OK, now that I have scanned your fic journal I realized that I have in fact read many of your fics already. Sorry I have not commented before now. I am happy to say that I am a fan and really enjoy your writing. You have a gift, thank you for sharing.
every Starbucks should have a polar bear: SGA: heescoradh on September 18th, 2007 08:02 pm (UTC)
No worries! I'd say more people don't comment that do. :D
fanfictionfanfanfictionfan on September 20th, 2007 12:30 am (UTC)
I just read the whole Road Travelled series and loved it all. I thought you did a wonderful job with your characterizations of Scorpius and Albus. The storyline was really interesting as well. It is the first time I've read a fic with such animosity between Albus and James and that Rose was closer to James than Albus. I really liked the contrast in that and the other fics I have read. Great job!
Petratishkovna: chibi lunaretsuko on October 2nd, 2007 05:09 pm (UTC)
This was marvelous.

(Here via crack_van, BTW.)

I really want to say something witty and profound here. Reading this was like getting a present, just what I had always wanted but didn't know how to ask for.

Thank you. :)
The Creativatorravenpan on October 2nd, 2007 10:36 pm (UTC)
The Road Less Travelled 10
DAWWWWWWWWW so much aww *snuggles them all, well, maybe not james* I'm so glad Scorpius was the one who was most worried :) And that he was THERE. BEAUTIFUL story - start to finish, I'm sad to see it ended.
kailangleykailangley on October 24th, 2007 01:57 am (UTC)
I absolutely adore your story. It made me giggle and grin like crazy! I love the malfoys, and how draco seems to have changed because of his marriage. :) I love Dudley teaching albus to fight, i like james growing a little, and Harry's grudge!! but most of all...i am so happy u=you are going to do an arc of the story! ill guess it will be six or seven years later for them right? Either way thank you fo rthe great read!
Lianeevilweevil04 on October 26th, 2007 09:08 am (UTC)
gahglegelgel. Did you know, this is the FIRST post book 7 fic that I've read. I wasn't sure if I would like fanfic after it and whatnot, since .. it was done and all.

But this was awesome. So awesome, in fact, that it is now over two hours after I should've gone to bed and I am going to be quite upset with myself tomorrow morning. Well, no, it's already morning. I need to stop typing.

Anyway. This was extremely well done and despite it being filled almost completely with OCs, they all felt just as canon as, say, Marauder-era fic, which is canon but not, of course, and ... yeah, okay, I'm not being coherent. I'm sorry. I just enjoyed this to a ridiculous amount and hope there is more but I'm going to NOT look yet because I should go to bed.
jehnt: sga - rodney likes foodjehnt on November 14th, 2007 05:07 pm (UTC)
Okay, so... I finished reading this a long time ago, and I always meant to comment with my thoughts but all I could think of was "pretty fucking brilliant, man" which I thought was not, you know, informative enough. But I can't, at this moment, really think of anything else to say. So...

It was pretty fucking brilliant, man.
(Anonymous) on January 6th, 2008 10:14 am (UTC)
haha i'm so late at reading this, but I guess that's okay because it was amazing. And all of your characters were so detailed and ugh! Amazing. I'm speechless and yet I'm still typing. I spent my entire day on this. I think I started at 6pm and now....it's 4:15am. Yeah, this was so good it made me stay up until the wee hours of the morning because i didn't dare think of not finishing it tomorrow. Well, later today. heh.
every Starbucks should have a polar bear: Beautiful human being/potatoscoradh on January 6th, 2008 06:21 pm (UTC)
Oh god, I think I've done that a couple times. Your eyes must be burning! I hope it was worth it. ♥
gina87: Danielgina87 on January 13th, 2008 08:32 pm (UTC)
Wow, great story! Really liked it!
every Starbucks should have a polar bearscoradh on January 14th, 2008 07:02 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
Oh the places you'll gosightsee on January 16th, 2008 02:54 am (UTC)
Wow. Wow. I honestly have no more words.
that which cannot be seen: gunsnhandcuffstresa_cho on January 21st, 2008 03:05 am (UTC)

...

.....

I wish I could come up with something more coherent than dajkvlf;dajfkdslajOMG

...

But I can't.
every Starbucks should have a polar bear: Blue parasolscoradh on January 21st, 2008 06:33 pm (UTC)
That's okay. :D
Cimorene: it's all about the informationminkhollow on February 17th, 2008 06:11 am (UTC)
Having wandered over from deadlyhollow and read the whole thing: THIS IS BRILLIANT. I'm not pulling up any more coherent praise than that, other than: Snape trying to explain Dickens as a wizard? Hilarious.
every Starbucks should have a polar bear: Cinderellascoradh on February 17th, 2008 10:42 am (UTC)
Thank you! Nice to see a positive response to the ending, lol.